New Fiction: How I Met My Daughter
I wrote another short story! I know, it’s crazy. It’s like I’m just pumping these things out. Anyway, it’s in stores now in Australia as part of The Bulletin’s Summer Reading Edition, in a super-cool layout complete with creepy doll’s head pic. I tell you, there’s something about a creepy doll’s head pic that just works with my writing, you know? Maybe I can get them to print some in my next novel.
If you’re not in Australia, this would be the time when you start to get annoyed. I mean, Australia was already pretty ace, but now it’s also got new Max Barry short stories with creepy doll’s head pics? That’s just too much. But I say would, because The Bulletin said I can post their spread here for your online enjoyment. Which is damn cool of them. So here it is:
This story is quite different to my usual groove, and I’m interested in what you think—whether you prefer this or Springtide, for example.
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austin (#2462)
Location: rhode island
Quote: "hmmm...bleh..."
Posted: 5977 days ago
Although, it might just be the less-pretty web version, but there was a lack of a few open quotation marks and it said 'friend chicken' instead of fried chicken. Teehee?
Max
Location: Melbourne, Australia
Quote: "I'm my number one fan!"
Posted: 5977 days ago
Bushra (#36)
Location: Fremont, California
Quote: "www.caffeinatedmuslim.com"
Posted: 5977 days ago
Picto (#64)
Location: United Kingdom
Quote: "Who is more foolish, the child afraid of the dark or the man afraid of the light? - Maurice Freehill"
Posted: 5977 days ago
Gregory Rubin (#72)
Location: Seattle, WA
Quote: "SSIMB!"
Posted: 5977 days ago
I think that's the first story of yours that I've read that actively disturbs me. Beautiful and left me wanting just a paragraph more. (Oh, such temptation.)
Joel (#3353)
Location: Michigan, USA
Quote: ""Sweet, flakey gods!""
Posted: 5977 days ago
That said, gripping and well-told. I particularly liked initial pages, about the monotony of trying to conceive. More people need to come to that realization.
Colette (#324)
Location: Houston, Texas, USA
Quote: ""The good Earth â we could have saved it, but we were too damn cheap and lazy" -- Kurt Vonnegut"
Posted: 5977 days ago
blab (#1632)
Location: The Sandwich Isles
Quote: "Adventure is just poor planning"
Posted: 5977 days ago
Josh Kinal (#3354)
Location: Melbourne, Australia
Posted: 5977 days ago
If creepy dolls' heads are your thing, can I present to you the work of the very talented Peter Milne: http://www.m33.net.au/prints.html
Josh
Josh Kinal (#3354)
Location: Melbourne, Australia
Posted: 5977 days ago
Katie Ellert (#207)
Location: Calgary AB Canada
Quote: "Where's Lola? WHERE'S LOLA?!?!"
Posted: 5977 days ago
It's completely different than any of your other work, which impressed me.
You have great talent. Keep up the amazing work.
--Katie
Robert (#1730)
Location: Tampa, FL
Posted: 5977 days ago
I love it when authors try out something different from their own norm.
Overall, I'm taken with this new piece. It was easy to get used to the greatness of your satire and with any luck, there'll be more shorts like this to get used to your serious side.
-Robert
shabooty (#637)
Location: D.C./V.A/M.D.
Quote: "I will shake your foundation. I will shake the f**cking rafters. Nobody'll be the same -Danny Bonaduce ....& go visit my blog @: http://www.shabooty.com"
Posted: 5977 days ago
i probably liked this better than springtide.
but its shiety asking a fanboy to choose favorites. =]
ps i liked the 'emo' ness of it. heh.
Danni (#357)
Location: England
Quote: "Eagerly awaiting the European Tour."
Posted: 5977 days ago
It was certainly good, but creepy. Very creepy.
Erin (#1296)
Location: Chandler AZ
Posted: 5977 days ago
At the beginning I was thinking it had a rather Nick Hornby feel to it. And then it got disturbing.
I prefer it to Springtide even though it makes me much more depressed. Great storytelling.
thewylddream (#1191)
Location: Montana USA
Quote: ""Always forgive your enemies -- Nothing annoys them so much." ~Oscar Wilde~"
Posted: 5977 days ago
This was a very compelling read. (And I tend to hate first person.)
Well done.
Nate Spears (#1454)
Location: Dallas, TX
Quote: ""Vengeance. Justice. Fire and blood." -Doran Martell"
Posted: 5977 days ago
I didn't know your wife and daughter's names so for a while I thought I was reading an autobiographical story. I was considering unsubscribing . . .
thewylddream (#1191)
Location: Montana USA
Quote: ""Always forgive your enemies -- Nothing annoys them so much." ~Oscar Wilde~"
Posted: 5977 days ago
bob (#2120)
Location: silicon valley
Quote: "they talked in papery whispers."
Posted: 5977 days ago
Phill Sacre (#1822)
Location: London, UK
Quote: "Computers are like air conditioners. Both stop working, if you open windows."
Posted: 5977 days ago
"I finished, and it was like plunging a blocked drain."
Almost LOLed at that one!
Very creepy, Max, and yes - I'm very glad it's not autobiographical!
Mats (#1057)
Location: Turku, Finland, Europe, Earth
Quote: ""The optimist thinks this is the best of all possible worlds, and the pessimist knows it." James Branch Cabell via Robert Oppenheimer"
Posted: 5977 days ago
When I read "quite different" I didn't expect to be transported to an alternate universe where Max Barry is someone totally different. That was some powerful stuff.
This definitely takes you to a new height as a writer. If this was made into a novel or a movie I'd probably cry a couple of times while reading or watching it.
But I'd say stick with the lighter satire. At least that makes you laugh. Or if you keep writing this kind of stuff, keep it in the short story form, or you might have to expect similar behavior from people all over the world as was caused by Goethes "The Sorrows of Young Werther".
Yikes. That story still gives me shivers. I think I have to go home and give my girlfriend a hug.
Lauri Shaw (#3325)
Location: London, England
Posted: 5977 days ago
It's really, really good.
jjhatch (#2651)
Location: Round Rock, TX
Quote: "Do not meddle in the affairs of dragons, for you are crunchy and good with ketchup!"
Posted: 5976 days ago
A very good story.
kitty (#1326)
Location: Upstate NY
Quote: "sweet"
Posted: 5976 days ago
Robert Silliman (#1845)
Location: Phoenix, AZ, USA
Quote: "He who dies with the most toys - is still dead."
Posted: 5976 days ago
a) near future
b) advertising
But - still has a signature 'Max' element - in that it swerves on you when you least expect it.
Linnea1928 (#2654)
Location: Rosemount, MN
Posted: 5976 days ago
Erin Tams (#2127)
Location: Sacramento, CA
Quote: "Buy Max Barry Books Today!"
Posted: 5976 days ago
My husband and I never had a problem getting pregnant. In fact he would complain that we didn't get to "try" enough. I think the story was excellent and touched my heart. Many fathers are intimidated by their children and your storyline seemed very real.
Great job. I love reading your words.
Max
Location: Melbourne, Australia
Quote: "I'm my number one fan!"
Posted: 5976 days ago
Emily (#609)
Location: New York
Quote: "When in doubt, fuck it. When not in doubt, get in doubt!"
Posted: 5976 days ago
Very well done, though, I loved it.
Lottie (#3093)
Location: Sheffield, UK
Posted: 5976 days ago
Should I have laughed at the very last line? 'Cause if not, I need some help.
towr (#1914)
Location: Netherlands
Posted: 5976 days ago
I can't really say whether I prefer it over springtide or not. Springtide is cleverder in a way, this one is more .. dramatic, I suppose.
Roger (#1653)
Posted: 5976 days ago
Prue Meehan (#3306)
Location: Australia
Quote: ""I intend to live forever. So far, so good." Steven Wright"
Posted: 5976 days ago
Caleb Crotzer (#1461)
Location: California, USA
Quote: "Breathe!!"
Posted: 5976 days ago
Adam (#24)
Location: Morristown, Indiana
Quote: "Why do I blog? Simple, because Max Barry blogs."
Posted: 5976 days ago
-adam
Jennifer M. Dambeck (#3061)
Location: NJ, USA
Quote: "Rock on"
Posted: 5975 days ago
Mid-way through I thought, why isn't he using his wife and child's real names? This story is so sweet . . .
The I got to the end and my heart breaks for the characters, what a great read, Max! Creepy and sad but still cool and "you"
Joe M. (#3183)
Location: Texas
Quote: "Grooviness is essential"
Posted: 5975 days ago
Very disturbing. It's been a while since a story was so discomforting to me. I think the last was Cormac McCarthy's "Outer Dark."
If I were to criticize: the paragraphs in which the character hears about the accident and goes to the hospital struck me as a little ham-handed, the sex was funny and sad, and the ending was perfectly horrible.
Thanks for sharing.
David (#1456)
Location: Sydney, Australia
Quote: "Why are the pretty ones always insane?"
Posted: 5975 days ago
And you'll be letting Fin read this at about what age? Oh I see. Yes, therapy is expensive at any age...
Kalle (#1278)
Quote: "Sex is herital. If your parents never had it, chanses are you'll never have it either."
Posted: 5975 days ago
Mark Tran (#3249)
Location: Canada
Quote: "If you lived here, You'd be home."
Posted: 5975 days ago
Abgrund (#3357)
Location: Atlantis
Quote: ""Redeem your mind from the hockshops of authority." - Ayn Rand"
Posted: 5974 days ago
It appears, Mr. Barry, that you are staring down the barrel of maturity. Good luck.
Joe (#2270)
Location: Campbell, CA, USA
Quote: "I'm subverting the system from the inside. I think."
Posted: 5974 days ago
Although the family in the story is clearly not yours, Max, I do kind of wonder how your wife feels about this story.
Oodge (#2790)
Location: Tas
Quote: "'Ooh look Marge, Maggie lost her baby legs.'"
Posted: 5974 days ago
I thought there were a couple of awkward paragraphs though. I don't know how much you were limited by the magazine, but I though a few more passages between the middle and the end would have added a lot.
Thanks Max
Jennifer M. Dambeck (#3061)
Location: NJ, USA
Quote: "Rock on"
Posted: 5973 days ago
Michael Ricksand (#2212)
Location: Terra
Quote: "You do not have a right to be stupid."
Posted: 5973 days ago
The second thing I thought about it is that "Kill your darlings"... Well, you get it.
Ail (#3358)
Location: See that shadow? Yeah. That one.
Quote: "Sometimes it seems like daytime is a re-occuring dream and getting into bed is just how the bad things get me."
Posted: 5972 days ago
This story, of course, instantly makes me think of my boy. I know he'll make a great father, and I a great mother, but even still, this short story of yours gave me a brain freeze. Owie.
"JAMES, GIVE ME HUGGLES!"
Anita (#405)
Location: Melbourne, Australia
Posted: 5972 days ago
I was not such a fan of Springtide. I think the first half especially really lets it down. I started it like 5 times before it broke through for me and I become interested, and I enjoyed it from there.
Im really glad to hear you are into writing some short stories at the moment because I love them! So I hope you dish out a few more!
Du'Loque (#3361)
Quote: "duloque.blogspot.com"
Posted: 5969 days ago
You've always dwelt on the mundane details in your stories, and even while you satirized consumer excess or ridiculous marketing, you never called us (us being the Western society, a willing or not-so-willing character in your story) worthless. Sometimes stupid, sometimes pointless, but never to be ignored or looked down upon.
It's a unpatronizing honesty, and it makes your characters human. Scat and I could not differ farther in philosophy or life goals, but he's my fictive hero and doppelganger because I still can identify with, if not him, all the shit he puts himself through.
Here, your style turns from satire to... something else. The result: creepy, and a little too close to home. I can't comment too much on the mechanics story itself, as I'd feel presumptuous; however, you've created a strange portrait of desire and I'd really, really like to see more of this.
Perhaps more short stories in this vein are to be expected? I can only hope.
Richard (#2051)
Location: Boulder, CO
Quote: "...I may not like you, but because some town in Switzerland says so, you have rights!"
Posted: 5969 days ago
Du'Loque (#3361)
Quote: "duloque.blogspot.com"
Posted: 5969 days ago
I'd just feel that the atmosphere (word I pulled right out of my ass, I'm sure there's a better one) of the story could be sustained from beginning to end, instead of the office-party-epiphany to the end.
Jeffrey (#2286)
Location: Right here
Quote: "Mathematics is a powerful language. Just look at how mathematicians destroyed the housing market."
Posted: 5966 days ago
Du'Loque (#3361)
Quote: "duloque.blogspot.com"
Posted: 5965 days ago
In their writing. Maybe they look alike? I don't know what Palahniuk looks like, so that could be it...
dieyoubastards (#3366)
Location: England
Posted: 5965 days ago
Du'Loque (#3361)
Quote: "duloque.blogspot.com"
Posted: 5964 days ago
Celeste (#2590)
Location: St.L. MO, USA
Quote: "You can't child-proof the world, so world-proof the child."
Posted: 5964 days ago
Confession: I only read one of your books, Jennifer Government, about 9 months ago. Thats after it was sitting on my nightstand for three months. I returned it to the library and paid the overdue fine three weeks ago.
I was surprised at the differences between the writing style of your book and that of your blogs. And at first, disappointed. The book seemed, um, so much "shallower". Then I read it again. And then I realized its seductive power. It did "seem" shallower, simpler. And that was its carefully crafted beauty. You dont get bogged down in telling us pages and pages of what is going on behind your characters eyes, like oh, Stephen King. You dont give us exquisite scene directions that put a photo still from the movie in our brains. You give us just enough. And place it pretty much in the world we are familiar with, and let our imagination put it in our own city, on our own block, populate it with people we already know.
And thats why its such very, very good satire.
And Springtide seems to be like that. Oh, sure, you're writing style has matured, you've grown, obviously, gotten very comfortable in this writing thing. Your marketing fiction it looks like, is getting even more creepy, and seems scarily prophetic.
But as everyone else has pointed out, "How I met my daughter" reads like one of your blogs. Its intimate, personal. It is in a way, very much deeper, for that.
Both of them are a bit more, hmm, I was going to say graphic but its not quite the right word, maybe hard core? soft porn? than your other stuff, which I think will appeal to a different, not necessarily wider, demographic. And may lose you some of your original readership.
Don't stop writing. Be aware that you may have more than one audience, though.
I suppose I should go buy some of your books.
Thanks for everything! :-)
Max
Location: Melbourne, Australia
Quote: "I'm my number one fan!"
Posted: 5964 days ago
Yes, Jen was a little freaked out by this story. I probably should have given her more warning than just, "Read this." My mother-in-law wasn't too fond of it, either. I keep forgetting that fiction is never read as pure fantasy. Even my editor at The Bulletin kept referring to the narrator as "you," which was creepy.
Adam (#580)
Location: Hotel Lobbies (with Winona Ryder)
Quote: "I want to be famous. Really famous."
Posted: 5963 days ago
Coming from him, this would have been expected. Coming from you, it's just depressing.
(Not a bad story, mind you, just shocking considering the source.)
Berkeley (#3374)
Location: Piedmont, SC USA
Posted: 5956 days ago
jessica (#3063)
Location: austin, tx
Quote: "You can't start a fire worrying about your little world falling apart."
Posted: 5955 days ago
JB (#2465)
Location: Southern Illinoise
Quote: "I love you so much, now let's get something to eat."
Posted: 5949 days ago
Here's what I did: I printed it out and gave it to her. We lay in bed and she read it. She was with you 'til the end. You lost her there.
My opinion isn't important. You are published and I have another workshop to attend this Spring.
Nevertheless, we convinced ourselves that the doctor told your narrator something that would justify him telling his wife to go to the light. Thing is, what is that something? I don't suppose we need to know, but the beginning isn't matching with the ending. There's a rift. Regardless of the story, I still plan to buy anything you release, so cheers!
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